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<accesscontrol>Administrators,Users(ro)</accesscontrol> The sample post fragments on this page are intended as illustration of what the management of the Wolff considers acceptable and unacceptable content when posting. The wording of the rules can be found on the Rules page.

WARNING: The following examples are graphic in nature and are not suitable for anyone under 18 years of age.


Language

15+

18+

Unacceptable

Violence

General Notes

Looking over the difference between the 18+ version of the situation and the NC-17, you'll note mainly subtle differences, not anything real major has changed but the level of violence has changed. The 18+ describes the bullet going through his head but leaves the exact details to one's imagination. The NC-17 version however does not, describing how the bullet blows the back of his head off, etc.

15+

Lt Johnson, in pursuit of a suspect, turned a corner hoping to gain on the person. Unknown to him, the suspect was armed with an old earth style semi-automatic pistol and as Johnson rounded the corner, the suspect let off two rounds at Johnson.
Johnson heard but barely had time to register the shots as the rounds slammed into his body, one impacting just below his shoulder, the other (a lucky shot) to his head. Lt Johnson crumpled to the ground, dead before what was left of his mind could comprehend what had just occurred.

18+

Lt Johnson, in pursuit of a suspect, turned a corner hoping to gain on the person. Unknown to him, the suspect was armed with an old earth style semi-automatic pistol and as Johnson rounded the corner, the suspect let off two rounds at Johnson.
Johnson heard but barely had time to register the shots as the rounds slammed into his body. One shot registered below his shoulder, shattering a rib as fragments of the round rattled around inside his rib cage, shredding part of his left lung before finally settling against his heart. Were 24th century medicine not so advanced, the wound would have been lethal but even in this century, he could just as easily bleed out internally before medical help arrived.
The second round however sealed his fate. Impacting his left temple, the second bullet shattered his skull, destroying bone and brain as it passed through his head. Johnson collapsed, (mercifully) dead before he reached the ground. His body landed in a heap, blood pooling beneath him as the suspect continued down the hall.

Unacceptable / NC-17

Lt Johnson, in pursuit of a suspect, turned a corner hoping to gain on the person. Unknown to him, the suspect was armed with an old earth style semi-automatic pistol and as Johnson rounded the corner, the suspect let off two rounds at Johnson.
Johnson heard but barely had time to register the shots as the rounds slammed into his body. One shot registered below his shoulder, shattering a rib as fragments of the round rattled around inside his rib cage, shredding part of his left lung before finally settling against his heart. Were 24th century medicine not so advanced, the wound would have been lethal but even in this century, he could just as easily bleed out internally before medical help arrived.
The second round however sealed his fate. Impacting his left temple, the second bullet shattered his skull as it passed through his head. Hydrostatic pressure from the bullet's entrance blew a fist size hole out the back of his skull, spraying blood and brain matter against the bulkhead. Johnson collapsed, (mercifully) dead before he reached the ground. His body landed in a heap, blood dripping from his mouth and nose, mingling with fragments from inside his skull, pooling underneath him.

Sexual Content

The following example was borrowed (with permission by the authors) from the USS Asgard PBEM simulation. Some editing has been done to bring the example(s) inline with the Wolff.

As with the Violence sample, the difference between 18+ and NC-17 is a matter of degrees and description. In the 18+ description, Danny's climax is described as his body stiffening as his peak came upon him, followed quickly by his release. The material let's the user's mind fill in the blanks as one would assume most readers of age 18 or older at least have passing familiarity with the mechanics of climax and how it works while engaged in sex with a women. Compare that to the NC-17 where Danny is described as pushing himself in as deep as he could before he peaked, then goes on to describe in some detail his ejaculation into Maria's body, and how his semen splashes around inside Maria's body.

The extra detail is what pushes the rating from 18+ to NC-17. You will notice however that in both cases, the language used is still tasteful and polite, with no real vulgar words used to describe the encounter. In essence, both treat the subject with respect, tho one goes into more detail. The line here is a matter of degrees,

One thing that was not shown, and will definitely not be tolerated, is the use of vulgar and disrespectful language such as might be found in pornographic writing. Describing Danny as rooting into Maria, jamming his pr*ck deep into her c*nt, filling her with his j*zz while she screams back at him "F*ck me Danny! Make a baby in me!" is certainly not acceptable, and will result in sanctions by the simm management.

15+

18+

(Borrowed from the USS Asgard PBEM simulation. Used by permission of the authors.)

Maria stepped out onto the porch of the old farmhouse, Rowlings not far behind as he was holding her hand. She smiled at him as he stood beside her. The night sky was beautiful tonight, the perfect night for romance. The air a little cool but not too cool.
"Father likes you." She remarked as she placed an arm around Rowlings' waist. "I don't think he'd mind if you hung around more often after today."
"I'm glad Maria... Do you think your children do? I've not been around that many, not sure what they like." Rowlings asked wondering how they would take to him if things became more than him being a sperm donor.
"Mind? I don't think so. The youngest two are my own and the older ones, I think they expect their oldest sister to find a man to settle down with who'll take over the farm and raise more children with her."
Maria gave Rowlings a kiss. "You are serious aren't you? That you wish to be more then just the genetic father of my child."
"Well it would depend on how your family feels. I can be stationed at the capital if the unit pulls out. Although it's not supposed to for a couple years. I'd have to finish my term. If we were to marry I wouldn't re enlist when it was over." Rowlings said in a quiet yet serious tone. "I know I really like being around you. We would need to spend a lot of time together when ever possible to be sure we're compatible, that it's more than just a physical thing."
"Dating or Courting you mean?" She nodded. "I think that would be for the best if you're serious." Wrapping her arms around Rowlings, embracing the marine. "But for now, let's enjoy the moment and worry about serious matters later."
Rowlings smiled and as was his way hugged her then cupped her bottom with his hands to pull her up against his already growing arousal while he kissed her and plundered her mouth hungrily with his tongue. "I think with you I would enjoy every moment of my life Maria." He spoke as he kissed along her jaw while he ground her against him.
Maria felt Rowlings arousal through the layers of her dress. She could feel her own passion, the heat coursing through her veins as she pressed in against Rowlings, returning his kiss with equal passion. "I think perhaps we should retire somewhere more comfortable?" She said in a low voice, her lips trembling as she pulled away from Rowlings slightly.
His breathing was harder. "Yes someplace more comfortable and more private." His voice now gruff with passion.
"Follow me." Maria took Rowlings hand and led him around to the back entrance of the house and then up the stairs to her room. Entering her room she closed the door behind her. She leaned back against the jamb, her hands on his hips, pulling him in close to her, her lips hungrily searching for his.
This time Rowlings didn't hold anything back as he kissed her, sucking her lower lip, plundering the interior of her mouth with his tongue. He groaned and lifted her so he fitted against her pushing his pelvis against hers so she was more than aware of his desire. "I don't know how long I can wait Maria."
Maria had been here several times with several men, had the offspring to prove it, and knew exactly what Rowlings was after. The same heat was coursing through her veins and while she displayed no outward physical signs of her arousal, her voice betrayed her.
"Then what are you waiting for Danny?" Maria commented as she pulled several berets out of her hair, exposing the true length of her tresses which fell down just below her shoulders. Giving her head a shake to loosen any remaining hair, she pressed in against him, her hand running around the waistband of his pants, searching for his buckle, her tongue tasting his lips as they locked.
Rowlings unfastened Maria's dress to slide it down her shoulders and left it there as he bent to taste her breasts and tease their tips with his lips. He pulled back and pushed her hands back so he could push the dress down her arms and let it fall. Then he guided her hands to his buckle and let her unfasten his pants while he was busy unlacing her bloomers to push those down too. He quickly removed his own shirt letting it fall to the floor. Then buried his face between her breasts moving to lick and suckle one side then the other until her tips were rigid peaks.
Maria, guided to the right spot by Rowlings hands, unfastened his belt buckle followed quickly by the button on his pants. Sliding the front zipper down, Maria slipped her hands underneath the waistband of his trousers & pushed them down over his hips. They soon fell to the ground alongside his discarded shirt and Maria's own clothes.
Rowlings now fully unclothed, Maria had a good view of the man's body. He wasn't chiseled but still exhibited a muscle definition that only a life of physical work and exercise could produce. Running her hands over Rowlings body while he enjoyed her breasts, Maria enjoyed the firmness of his core and lower body.
Rowlings was enjoying her breasts and she could feel his tongue dancing over her tips, making them erect as he played with them. She threw her head back, pressing her chest in closer to Rowlings, pulling his head in closer as she let out a gentle moan of pleasure.
While the two of them were getting acquainted with each others bodies, Maria was slowly drifting the two of them over to her bed. Reaching the edge, she could feel the frame with the back of her calves. Pulling away from Rowlings slightly so he could see where they were, Maria sat down on the foot of her bed before scooting up a bit and lying down on her back. Rowlings quickly joined her, lying down beside her, facing her and he continued playing with her breasts.
Rowlings moved so he could kiss Maria again, his hand moving down from her breasts to the slight swell of her tummy where he rested it as he pulled away from the kiss. "I hope you'll have many more babies." Then his hand went further down as he watched her. He explored her with his fingers and he could tell she was as ready as he was. He moved sliding his leg over her thigh to spread her and kneeled between. His eyes never leaving her face he paused and waited. "Tell me you want me Maria."
Maria felt the gentle touch of Rowling's hand as it settled on her tummy just below her navel. She shivered when his hand drifted further south, his finger sending tingles of pleasure through her body as he caressed her. She looked up at Rowlings who now knelt between her outspread legs. She leaned her head back enjoying the sensations of pleasure racing throughout her body. Spreading her legs a little further to make it easier for Rowlings. "I want you Danny. Please take me."
"I want to hear those words for the rest of my life." His eyes still locked on her face Rowlings groaned softly as he lowered himself to press against her, then slide slowly inside gasping as she engulfed him. "My beautiful Maria." He breathed and began a slow rhythm.
"Oh Danny." Maria moaned as she felt him enter her. Pulling him down closer to her, Maria kissed Danny as she rocked her hips in time to his rhythm.
Even now he couldn't stop from touching her, Rowlings kissed her, he supported himself with one hand allowing the other to roam over her shoulder and breast, teasing her hard peak as he moved within her. Soon he needed to use both hands to brace himself, his eyes bored into Maria's as his pace quickened the primal urge taking over.
Maria could feel Rowlings tempo change as the two of them made love in her bed. Soon she felt an uncontrollable sense of passion build within her body and she knew she was beginning her final climb. Responding to Rowlings touch, "Oh Danny!" she moaned, her body stiffening under him.
Now he plunged even harder spurred on by her moans. Her bed creaking with their movements. He knew it wouldn't take him much longer but he wanted her to go first. "Now Maria now." His groan nearly a growl as he held back his own release.
Maria held back for the briefest of moments before she herself go. The throes of her climax began and she bucked under Rowlings as waves of pleasure washed over her body.
It didn't take much more than that, he felt her muscles pulling at him with each movement, soon his release was eminent. "Oh yes Maria." He froze, his back arching as he peaked, his release overcoming him.
Maria groaned as another wave of pleasure washed over her body. As she came down off the wave, Maria felt Rowlings tense on top of her, his body arching as his peak came upon him, followed quickly by his release.
"Danny." She cooed as he relaxed, resting himself on top of her. She cupped her hands around his hips, holding him on top of her as their intertwined bodies relaxed in the soft afterglow of their lovemaking.
She smiled up at Danny, a dreamy look on her face. "That was wonderful. Thank you."
"Thank you, Maria if I were to say I love you, would it please you?" Rowlings whispered against her neck as he nuzzled her while holding her to him. "Or scare you away?"
"It would please me greatly Danny" She whispered back. "And hopefully the first of many."
"I love you Maria." He spoke louder but with a softness to his voice. Then he kissed her lips once more. "Do you need to rest now?"
"The night is young and I have a very handsome man sharing my bed. Why would I wish to rest?"
"You're also a mother. I know children can tire a mother out, at least my mother claimed I did her." He chuckled then with his arms holding her to him he rolled on his back. "I am yours to do with what you want Maria."
"Mia and father will look after the children. For tonight I am free of the responsibility." Looking down at the man who'd just made love to her, she pressed closer against him, running a finger along the side of his face. "You are mine?"
"Most definitely." He spoke grasping her hair and pulling her gently down for a long kiss. "For as long as you'll have me." His free hand moved over her well rounded buttocks.
"I would have you take me again lover," she growled as she pulled Danny closer to her.
Rowlings did just that even more exploringly than the first time, he was still learning which touch and movement made her react even more and he would repeat those things until he heard those soft moans then he'd try something new.
The evening wound on as the two made love into the night, this time more slow paced. Eventually tho the inevitable came the second time. Maria whimpered and cried out in pleasure as Danny peaked, groaning as he released for the second time that night. The height of their passion spent, the two of them collapsed on each other, curling up in Maria's bed, falling asleep in each others arms.
Eventually however, day came and as the first trickles of light peaked through the window, Maria could feel Danny stir as he awoke.
Rowlings pulled her close not wanting to lose the intimate contact with her. "Maria, can I come back to you tonight? I will have to leave soon to make it back to the camp."
"Of course Danny. You are welcome on the farm, and in my bed, any time."

Unacceptable / NC-17

Maria stepped out onto the porch of the old farmhouse, Rowlings not far behind as he was holding her hand. She smiled at him as he stood beside her. The night sky was beautiful tonight, the perfect night for romance. The air a little cool but not too cool.
"Father likes you." She remarked as she placed an arm around Rowlings' waist. "I don't think he'd mind if you hung around more often after today."
"I'm glad Maria... Do you think your children do? I've not been around that many, not sure what they like." Rowlings asked wondering how they would take to him if things became more than him being a sperm donor.
"Mind? I don't think so. The youngest two are my own and the older ones, I think they expect their oldest sister to find a man to settle down with who'll take over the farm and raise more children with her."
Maria gave Rowlings a kiss. "You are serious aren't you? That you wish to be more then just the genetic father of my child."
"Well it would depend on how your family feels. I can be stationed at the capital if the unit pulls out. Although it's not supposed to for a couple years. I'd have to finish my term. If we were to marry I wouldn't re-enlist when it was over." Rowlings said in a quiet yet serious tone. "I know I really like being around you. We would need to spend a lot of time together when ever possible to be sure we're compatible, that it's more than just a physical thing."
"Dating or Courting you mean?" She nodded. "I think that would be for the best if you're serious." Wrapping her arms around Rowlings, embracing the marine. "But for now, let's enjoy the moment and worry about serious matters later."
Rowlings smiled and as was his way hugged her then cupped her bottom with his hands to pull her up against his already erect manhood while he kissed her and plundered her mouth hungrily with his tongue. "I think with you I would enjoy every moment of my life Maria." He spoke as he kissed along her jaw while he ground her against him.
Maria felt Rowlings arousal through the layers of her dress. She could feel her own passion, the heat coursing through her veins as she pressed in against Rowlings, returning his kiss with equal passion. "I think perhaps we should retire somewhere more comfortable?" She said in a low voice, her lips trembling as she pulled away from Rowlings slightly.
His breathing was harder. "Yes someplace more comfortable and more private." His voice now gruff with passion.
"Follow me." Maria took Rowlings hand and led him around to the back entrance of the house and then up the stairs to her room. Entering her room she closed the door behind her. She leaned back against the jamb, her hands on his hips, pulling him in close to her, her lips hungrily searching for his.
This time Rowlings didn't hold anything back as he kissed her, sucking her lower lip, plundering the interior of her mouth with his tongue. He groaned and lifted her so he fitted against her pushing his pelvis against hers so she was more than aware of his desire straining underneath the cloth of his pants. "I don't know how long I can wait Maria."
Maria had been here several times with several men, had the offspring to prove it, and knew exactly what Rowlings was after. The same heat was coursing through her veins and while she displayed no outward physical signs of her arousal, her voice betrayed her.
"Then what are you waiting for Danny?" Maria commented as she pulled several berets out of her hair, exposing the true length of her tresses which fell down just below her shoulders. Giving her head a shake to loosen any remaining hair, she pressed in against him, her hand running around the waistband of his pants, searching for his buckle, her tongue tasting his lips as they locked.
Rowlings unfastened Maria's dress to slide it down her shoulders and left it there as he bent to taste her breasts and tease their tips with his lips. He pulled back and pushed her hands back so he could push the dress down her arms and let it fall. Then he guided her hands to his buckle and let her unfasten his pants while he was busy unlacing her bloomers to push those down too. He quickly removed his own shirt letting it fall to the floor. Then buried his face between her breasts moving to lick and suckle one side then the other until her tips were rigid peaks. Meanwhile his hands sought her hips, running them across the smooth skin, teasingly close to her inner thighs.
Maria, guided to the right spot by Rowlings hands, unfastened his belt buckle followed quickly by the button on his pants. Sliding the front zipper down, Maria slipped her hands underneath the waistband of his trousers & pushed them down over his hips. They soon fell to the ground alongside his discarded shirt and Maria's own clothes.
Rowlings now fully unclothed, Maria had a good view of the man's body. He wasn't chiseled but still exhibited a muscle definition that only a life of physical work and exercise could produce. Running her hands over Rowlings body while he enjoyed her breasts, Maria enjoyed the firmness of his core and lower body. Her hands drifting down around his hips, she traced her nail along his thigh and around his erect manhood. Taking the twins in her hand, she gently hefted them, feeling their weight before letting them go and giving his erect manhood a gentle tug.
Rowlings was enjoying her breasts and she could feel his tongue dancing over her tips, making them erect as he played with them. Maria threw her head back, pressing her chest in closer to Rowlings, pulling his head in closer as she let out a gentle moan of pleasure.
While the two of them were getting acquainted with each others bodies, Maria was slowly drifting the two of them over to her bed. Reaching the edge, she could feel the frame with the back of her calves. Pulling away from Rowlings slightly so he could see where they were, Maria sat down on the foot of her bed before scooting up a bit and lying down on her back. Rowlings quickly joined her, lying down beside her, facing her and he continued playing with her breasts.
Rowlings moved so he could kiss Maria again, his hand moving down from her breasts to the slight swell of her tummy where he rested it as he pulled away from the kiss. "I hope you'll have many more babies." Then his hand went further down as he watched her. He explored her labia with his fingers and he could tell from the dampness that she was as ready for this as he was. He moved sliding his leg over her thigh to spread her and kneeled between her outspread legs. His eyes never leaving her face he paused and waited. "Tell me you want me Maria."
Maria felt the gentle touch of Rowling's hand as it settled on her tummy just below her navel. She shivered when his hand drifted further south, his finger sending tingles of pleasure through her body as he caressed her labia and pleasure button. She looked up at Rowlings who now knelt between her outspread legs. She leaned her head back enjoying the sensations of pleasure racing throughout her body. Spreading her legs a little further to make it easier for Rowlings. "I want you Danny. Please take me."
"I want to hear those words for the rest of my life." His eyes still locked on her face Rowlings groaned softly as he lowered himself onto Maria. "My beautiful Maria." He gasped as he entered her, the warm wet glove of her body enveloping his manhood.
"Oh Danny." Maria moaned as she felt him enter her. Inch by inch he slid into her until he bottomed on the entrance to her womb. Pulling him down closer to her, wrapping her hips around his legs, Maria kissed Danny as she rocked her hips in time to his rhythm.
Even now he couldn't stop from touching her, Rowlings kissed her, he supported himself with one hand allowing the other to roam over her shoulder and breasts, teasing her hard peaks as his manhood moved within her. Soon he needed to use both hands to brace himself, his eyes bored into Maria's as his pace quickened, the primal mating urge taking over.
Maria could feel Rowlings tempo change as the two of them made love in her bed. Soon she felt an uncontrollable sense of passion build within her body and she knew she was beginning her final climb. Responding to Rowlings touch, "Oh Danny!" she moaned, her body stiffening under him.
Now he plunged even harder spurred on by her moans. The bed creaking with their movements. He knew it wouldn't take him much longer but he wanted her to go first. "Now Maria now." His groan nearly a growl as he held back his own release.
Maria held back for the briefest of moments before she herself go. The throes of her climax began and she bucked under Rowlings as waves of pleasure washed over her body, her body spasming on Danny's manhood, muscles clenching inside her, pulling him towards his own climax.
It didn't take much more than that, he felt her muscles pulling at him with each movement, soon his release was eminent. "Oh yes Maria." He froze, arching his back as he penetrated Maria deeply, his manhood releasing it's load of life giving seed into Maria. The first spurt was followed by several more as Danny grunted on top of Maria, each load splashing against her waiting womb.
Maria groaned as another wave of pleasure washed over her body. As she came down off the crest, Maria felt Rowlings tense on top of her, his body arching as he pushed himself in as deep as he could go. "Danny," She cooed as he unloaded himself into her body, the feeling of his seed splashing against her womb, his contribution to the child she hoped they were making at this very moment.
Danny relaxed, resting himself on top of her. Her legs wrapped around his, holding him on top of her, his slowly wilting meat still inside her as their intertwined bodies relaxed in the soft afterglow of their lovemaking.
She smiled up at Danny, a dreamy look on her face. "That was wonderful. Thank you."
"Thank you, Maria if I were to say I love you, would it please you?" Rowlings whispered against her neck as he nuzzled her while holding her to him. "Or scare you away?"
"It would please me greatly Danny" She whispered back. "And hopefully the first of many."
"I love you Maria." He spoke louder but with a softness to his voice. Then he kissed her lips once more. "Do you need to rest now?"
"The night is young and I have a very handsome man sharing my bed. Why would I wish to rest?"
"You're also a mother. I know children can tire a mother out, at least my mother claimed I did her." He chuckled then with his arms holding her to him he rolled on his back. "I am yours to do with what you want Maria."
"Mia and father will look after the children. For tonight I am free of the responsibility." Looking down at the man who'd just made love to her, she pressed closer against him, running a finger along the side of his face. "You are mine?"
"Most definitely." He spoke grasping her hair and pulling her gently down for a long kiss. "For as long as you'll have me." His free hand moved over her well rounded buttocks.
"I would have you take me again lover," she growled as she pulled Danny closer to her.
Rowlings did just that even more exploringly than the first time, he was still learning which touch and movement made her react even more and he would repeat those things until he heard those soft moans then he'd try something new.
The evening wound on as the two made love into the night, this time more slow paced. Eventually tho the inevitable came the second time. Maria whimpered and cried out in pleasure as Danny peaked, groaning as he released another load of his seed into her waiting womb. The height of their passion spent, the two of them collapsed on each other, curling up in Maria's bed, falling asleep in each others arms.
Eventually however, day came and as the first trickles of light peaked through the window, Maria could feel Danny stir as he awoke.
Rowlings pulled her close not wanting to lose the intimate contact with her. "Maria, can I come back to you tonight? I will have to leave soon to make it back to the camp."
"Of course Danny. You are welcome on the farm, and in my bed, any time."